The
draw
bridge
lifts
and
some
stay
while
others
go
in
an
eternal
round
of
travelers
Archive for the ‘Poetry’ Category
Sweets
Posted in Poetry on June 24, 2011| Leave a Comment »
Our Daily Choices
Posted in Poetry on June 24, 2011| Leave a Comment »
Plush Carpet Moments
Posted in Poetry on May 23, 2011| Leave a Comment »
Scents
of
the
past
echo
In
the
peaceful
room,
drawing
the
Other
into
open
eternities
spilling
counsel
over
all
Present,
Creating
a
new
Echo
for
One
Cracked Seal
Posted in Poetry on May 11, 2011| Leave a Comment »
These
Hallowed
Halls
Ring
Hollow
And
Shine
Brightly
To
The
Intoxicated
New
And
Old
With
An
Elect
Few
Compassionately
Relocating
The
Influenced
Manipulating
Masses
The poem “Cracked Seal” is a pithy work that prompts a critical evaluation of its significance. On the surface, the poem seems to convey a sense of hollowness or vacuity, despite the existence of a few individuals who are capable of manipulating others for their own benefit. However, it also suggests the actions of these few may be motivated by a genuine concern for others rather than a desire for personal gain or power.
The opening lines, “These hallowed halls ring hollow,” immediately establish the poem’s theme of disillusionment, as the description of the halls as “hallowed” and “ringing” suggests an aura of sanctity and substance that is belied by the reality of their emptiness. The following line, “And shine brightly to the intoxicated new and old,” adds to this impression, as the description of the halls as “shining brightly” implies a false or superficial brilliance that is only visible to those who are blinded by their own inebriation or experience.
The phrase “an elect few” in the seventh line is a significant pivot in the poem, as it shifts the focus from the masses to the individuals who possess the power to manipulate and control them. The use of the word “compassionately” to describe these individuals adds complexity to their characterization, suggesting that their actions may be motivated by a genuine concern for others, rather than a desire for personal gain or power.
The final line of the poem, “manipulating masses,” serves as a succinct summary of the poem’s central theme, highlighting the power dynamic between those who control and those who are controlled. However, the use of the word “influenced” earlier in the poem suggests that this control may not be absolute, and that individuals may retain a measure of agency despite their manipulation.
In conclusion, “Cracked Seal” is a powerful and thought-provoking poem that explores themes of disillusionment, power, and agency. Through its use of vivid imagery and evocative language, the poem challenges the reader to question the true nature of power and control, and to consider the role of compassion and agency in human interactions.







Outsiders
Posted in Poetry on April 30, 2011| Leave a Comment »
Short
and
Tall
young
and
old
seep
into
new
lives
from
the
distant
past
finding
neither
Rainy Day
Posted in Poetry on April 30, 2011| Leave a Comment »
A
Silver
flash
moves
through
the
cool
darkness
with
quiet
confidence
looking
for
solace
amidst
painful
rain
seizing
the
moment
Brown Bag
Posted in Poetry on April 30, 2011| Leave a Comment »
A
dark
reflection
glares
in
front
of
the
stationary
blank
image;
slipping
forward
to
new
destinations
walking
away
from
fear
Clean Windows
Posted in Poetry on April 30, 2011| Leave a Comment »
The
chest
is
tight
constricting
breath,
moving
sleep;
breaking
broken
alliances
to
slow
down
and
fly
higher
with
others
following
new
paths
Out of Order
Posted in Poetry on January 30, 2011| Leave a Comment »
Sitting
Quietly
In
Loud
Spaces
Seeking
The
Holy
Inside
The
Worldly;
Silent
Thoughts
Inspire
The
Weary
Heart
as
Inspiration
Moves
The
Metaphysical
Moment
To
A
New
Anchor
Point.
See-Saw
Posted in Poetry on January 6, 2011| Leave a Comment »
Silence
Secrets
Suffering,
Separate
Lives
Lived
Aloof
And
Alone,
Pulling
Pushing
Toward
Tangled
Tears
Cried
By
All